Instead of doing a read and predict this week, we had to do a read, predict and write! I think I like the read, predict and write better than the read and predict because I can let my mind take me wherever I want when I'm writing and I can spill all my ideas and words onto the page. I think I like my story because I tried to make it short and interesting and I'm pretty sure I did that. I rate my work a Supernova because I really tried to make both my description and writing as good as I could make it.
Fantastic ending Ashley. I love the way you used the descriptive word 'lingered', this is such a great way to describe a smile!
ReplyDeleteWere there any appropriate places in your conclusion to create paragraph breaks?